Monday, April 23, 2012

The second verse and additions

Whilst writing the bridge and second verse I thought a lot about what I wanted to do with my song and who I wanted to listen to it. A powerful singer would be the focus instrument as this is my strength. I wanted to bring my message about solving the world's problems.


I tried to write the second part of my song as well which became:
 
It's the real world, seen through my eyes,
Keep dreaming, don't stop believing,
You can do anything you like,
The world keeps spinning,
Your life keeps on going on,
And if you dream of the castle world,
you're living in my song.


As I realized that..
Everything wasn't perfect,
I tried to do the best I could,
And you know that it was all worth it oooo,
Because one person makes a difference, so lend a hand.


Pre-chorus -
No one hungry, no disease, no bad governance, no corruption, no endangered species.
No pride, no envy… no gluttony, sloth, no hate, no wrath, no lust nor greed...honey...


I wrote the second verse and pre-chorus in the same style as the original lyrics which I had written in order to remain like one song. I was having a lot of trouble finding a tune for the chorus though so I mainly just improvised here.

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