Development

I know I need to develop my song but I don't know what this really means, I already feel satisfied with what I've produced for the verse. . I recorded a new different part really focusing on the strengths of my voice. My favourite part of my song was the echoing section with "no wars, no wars" I wasn't especially pleased with the chorus so decided to recreate some of this using different words


I also recorded my bridge section which I was especially pleased with, I wanted it to sound like a choir of different people singing, perhaps whilst clapping.

 I wanted to focus on creating some gospel sections in the song and when I spoke to Mr Mcgibbon he agreed that what I had produced so far although good wasn't excellent. To lift it he helped me to re-record sections of organ, guitar and piano and create a new layout to my whole piece which would lift it.

The catch "the real world" would be repeated throughout  and I could sing over the top of this with the chorus and vocally improvising at the end of the song.


The layout is as so:


This is the draft paper version.

A clearer representation is here:

I feel like this is still open to interpretation and I may add in more solos, I need to really work on these vocal harmonies using broken chords and the combination of different voices.